This looking glass.

[kailee]

She reads a tale of imaginative wars
Wondering if the life she leads is realy hers.
Or just a reflection in the blackness
Some might call looking glasses.
Who is this girl? Her soul so true
With eyes of greenish, grayish blue?
She might be me. I do not know.
She wont let her reflection show.
Perhaps this looking glass plays tricks.
For green and gray and blue dont mix.

Coments or constructive criticism welcome.

[Alyss Redd]

I like it, sounds good.
what else to say, keep on going, you "rock".

[kailee]

Thank you so much. I realy dont know where it came from I just thought of it one day.

[Dodge Anders King]

It sounds great. The imagination is already described on many ways .;)

[kailee]

I what way? There are many ways throught wich we can discribe our thoughts. This is my expression and I choose to express it many ways through.

[Dodge Anders King]

The way is deeper... Excellent!

[kailee]

Thank you I guess I'm just a deep person hidden in the shallows.

In my dark.
Through this dark I find my light,
Hidden In the shadows.
Where will this path lead me,
I try to find the one who knows.
Hidden in my Genius,
I find my weaker side.
Where is my one and only,
Safe place to hide?
I guess we'll never find out,
But if in the end we do,
I hope that I can find that place.
And be safe there with you.

Comments and suggestions welcome.

[Alyss Heart]

Wow! Those poems are great! ;)

[kailee]

thank you very much. Inspiration flows like water down a river and everywhere I go I find something new.

[hatter pendragon]

I'll have to start giving you some competition and post up some of my stuff soon! Nice imagery you've got.

As I am,

Hatter Pendragon

[kailee]

That would be realy cool if you posted some stuff up here. I like to write and I try to get at least one poem up a week. And thank you very much for the complement.

[Storyweaver Kayest]

You're really good. Mind if I post one of mine?

This is my one and only poem so far. It's called A Song of Darkness:

Death defying cold’s dark secrets
Light penetrating ebony night
Bitter sugar coating sweetest poison
Life undone at first breath’s right
In darkness lies the shadow’s death
In light, wanting, hunger, forever myth
In between, the balanced scale
Live forever, the bliss to fail
Give us night, a true tomorrow
A spark of piece, a cloak of sorrow
And wielding knife of blackest morrow
Ride the ashes to the grave
Taste the sunlight’s burning rays
Touch the rain with gilded wings
And fly away you distant thing
For we remain in the darkness
Hidden, hiding from the monster
Screaming agony’s dagger cry
In sunlit valleys of the night.

[Heart Artemis Hunter]

my turn!
this is called Crimson Meadow or Crimson Briars (What Makes the Briars Red)

Crimson flowers surround me.
Black are their stems.
Gray rumbles overhead
With black lightning and
Silver thunder roars.

I stand alone, I am alone.
Who knows?
Maybe I exist alone
With the crimson flowers with
Black stems.

They part and reveal my own
Pale face or mayb another's
Cut, and wearing death clothes awaiting
Judgment from someone, from themselves.

Crimson flowers surround me.
Black are their stems.
Gray rumbles overhead
With black lightning and
Silver thunder roars.
Church bells chime,
Sounding my time.
Sounding my time
Which is long run out.
And the church bells chime as i fall.
The flowers hold a feast upon paling flesh.

Chiming more dullily now, red rain
Falls and people watch up in the sky
As the bloody feast continues.

And the bells stop
And I am left pale
In the crimson meadow
Of crimson briars.

Crimson flowers surround me.
Black are their stems.
Gray rumbles overhead
With black lightning and
Silver thunder roars
As I am Hidden amongst
The briars.

[Princess_Matty_Heart]

Nice! It's very cool! You two write awesome poems!

[Heart Artemis Hunter]

thanks. i wrote it in english and then i thought of redd

[kailee]

Ah im sorry i havn't updated in forever. I just havn't been on much. anyway i feel really awesome right now, I was quoted in the schools section of the website =O you should check it out for me guys ^-^

[Shadow]

Thank you I guess I'm just a deep person hidden in the shallows.

In my dark.
Through this dark I find my light,
Hidden In the shadows.
Where will this path lead me,
I try to find the one who knows.
Hidden in my Genius,
I find my weaker side.
Where is my one and only,
Safe place to hide?
I guess we'll never find out,
But if in the end we do,
I hope that I can find that place.
And be safe there with you.

Comments and suggestions welcome.
Wow,I love your poems! My aunt writes poetry,and your poems sound a lot like hers would. Keep writing more for us to enjoy! =)

[Shadow]

my turn!
this is called Crimson Meadow or Crimson Briars (What Makes the Briars Red)

Crimson flowers surround me.
Black are their stems.
Gray rumbles overhead
With black lightning and
Silver thunder roars.

I stand alone, I am alone.
Who knows?
Maybe I exist alone
With the crimson flowers with
Black stems.

They part and reveal my own
Pale face or mayb another's
Cut, and wearing death clothes awaiting
Judgment from someone, from themselves.

Crimson flowers surround me.
Black are their stems.
Gray rumbles overhead
With black lightning and
Silver thunder roars.
Church bells chime,
Sounding my time.
Sounding my time
Which is long run out.
And the church bells chime as i fall.
The flowers hold a feast upon paling flesh.

Chiming more dullily now, red rain
Falls and people watch up in the sky
As the bloody feast continues.

And the bells stop
And I am left pale
In the crimson meadow
Of crimson briars.

Crimson flowers surround me.
Black are their stems.
Gray rumbles overhead
With black lightning and
Silver thunder roars
As I am Hidden amongst
The briars.

Wow,did you really write that? It's a great poem,filled with beauty,but with a darker side,also. ^_^

http://www.lookingglasswars.com/img/links/G04Q001W101.jpg

[kailee]

Wow! It's kinda strange to look back at these, but in a good way :] I haven't been writing much lately but I've been doing a ton of stuff with art, both 2d and 3d :D so let me know if any of you guys want to see some, i love sharing what makes me happy.

[Heart Artemis Hunter]

Wow,did you really write that? It's a great poem,filled with beauty,but with a darker side,also. ^_^

http://www.lookingglasswars.com/img/links/G04Q001W101.jpg
yeah i really wrote it. :) thank you :) i really tried to just picture a field of roses and....yeah....o_O

[Perite11]

please type more in the future, more detail is always good.