My LGW poem...

[LookingGlassEcho]

ok so basically i made up a poem and it's actually called The Looking Glass lol. What do you think?

The Looking Glass

The Looking Glass
Taints everything i know
Creates confusion
About the world.

Have i taken
A step too far
Will my reflection
Support me as i fall.

The shattered pieces
Melt like snow
Renewing the world
But i call it my own.

Inside i find
My precious memories
Photographed on the walls.

Why can't everyday
Belong inside
The Looking Glass.

[metauphoria]

This is very very very good!
I am working on a poem called "My Own Wonderland" for a magazine our school publishes...Well, that has nothing to do with this, but anyways.
You are very talented!

[LookingGlassEcho]

awww thankyou very much!

I like the title of yours though. Maybe once you've done it you could post it?

[Alyss Heart]

That was so great!!! You should write more poems!
I wish I could write like that!

[LookingGlassEcho]

awww thankyou! :) i have written more poems but they aren't based on LGW they're just random ones haha :p

[Alyss Heart]

What are they about?

[LookingGlassEcho]

erm i don't really know to tell you the truth lol. They just seem to pop into my head haha here's a couple of links to my other poems if you're interested.


http://www.bebo.com/These-things

http://just-anything.bebo.com

[Alyss Heart]

Okay! Thanks!