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QueenOfHearts_07
10-16-2007, 12:46 PM
Oooh, I'm one of the first to get a post up in here :D. This is just a little Alyss/Dodge story that has been floating around my head for a while now. Baisically, it's five moments Alyss and Dodge never shared (but totally should have XD). I haven't quite decided on the fourth and fifth ones yet, but I'll post them up when I do. And here's the trailer for my bigger LGW fic which is as yet still in the works
LGW-Looking Glass (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cHJ6y891cU8)




The first time came the night after Redd's defeat...
With Redd gone and the true heir to the Wonderland throne back in power, Alyss and her new retinue had begun heading back to Wondertropolis, not wanting to spend any longer in Mount Isolation than necessary. General Doppleganger and Bibwit had managed to contact those Alyssians lucky enough to survive the Cat's carnage at their camp in the Everlasting Forest and the Heart Crystal was on its way to the Valley of Mushrooms to be protected by the Caterpillars until such time as it could be returned to the capital.

Camped just within the borders of the Whispering Woods for the night, Dodge had volunteered to take up first watch; knowing that Seekers, Glass Eyes and soldiers for the Cut may still be running loose despite their mistress' downfall. It wasn't like he was going to get any sleep anyway, not knowing that his father's murderer had escaped him once again. Yet it was during his brooding vigil that he heard Alyss murmer a single word in her sleep.

"Dodge..."

Even now, hearing her speak his name again was like part of some blessed dream. Dodge was half expecting to awaken at any moment to find Redd's reign of terror still holding sway over Wonderland and Alyss still believed dead.

Even from where he was sitting, Dodge could see the fear and worry etched onto his childhood friend's beautiful face, clearly trapped in a nightmare like those that had so often plagued his slumber after that fateful day thirteen years ago. It had always broken his heart whenever he had seen her upset and no matter how much they had been through - both together and apart - that part of him at least had never changed. The second she jolted awake with a yell, Dodge was by her side, pulling her into an embrace as Alyss burst into tears against his shoulder.

"Dodge, it was so horrible..." Alyss murmered after she managed to calm herself down a little, "Redd was slaughtering you and there was absolutely nothing I could do to stop her. It was just..."

"She's already seperated us once Alyss" Dodge murmered, pulling her a little closer and stroking her hair comfortingly, "I swear to you, we're never going to be seperated again..."

redd_wars
10-26-2007, 12:56 PM
That was great! You're an awesome writer! Keep it up!
Have you ever posted anything on fanfiction.net? That site has fanfiction from about everything but I haven't seen any LGWs yet. Maybe you could post yours.

Alyria_Bella
11-05-2007, 02:31 PM
That was great
Got any of the other moments love:o to read them
you got real talent

The Dark Hatter
11-09-2007, 09:33 PM
Awesome. You really do have talent.

Alyss Heart
11-12-2007, 04:22 PM
That was awesome!

Mad_Hatter_Madigan
03-31-2008, 03:03 PM
This was very good, as before, check out mine called the Valley of the Lost. I hope I can get some positive (or negative, either way) feedback. So look it up and tell me what you think...

QueenOfHearts_07
04-22-2008, 11:37 AM
Okay, it's been a while, but I've finally managed to get the next part done!
Alyss' Mask (http://tn3-2.deviantart.com/fs11/300W/i/2006/252/d/3/Blue_pheasant_mask_1_by_Easnadh.jpg)
Dodge's Mask (not quite the same, but similar enough XD) (http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs27/i/2008/063/f/c/Mask_of_Fire__The_Phoenix_Mask_by_icekittyekat.jpg )



The second time came the night of the completion of the new Heart Palace...
To celebrate the completion of her new home, Alyss had decided to organise a masquerade ball in the grounds of the new palace to celebrate the hard work that had gone into rebuilding the palace in exactly every detail of the old one. So she was able to "more closely supervise the construction, Alyss had abstained from taking up the offer of staying in one of the Suit Family's manors and had instead created an almost Alyssian-esque camp in the alace grounds, (it was a lot easier to spend time alone with Dodge that way...) Since the night of Redd's defeat when she and Dodge had shared that moment after her nightmare, she and her Captain had grown visibly closer. Molly and Bibwit had been the ones to see it clearer than anyone, Alyss' young bodyguard had even caught her slipping out of Dodge's tent right before the party looking extremely pleased with herself, despite the fact Dodge had been off double checking the security for the party.

The masquerade was almost over by the time Dodge plucked up the courage to actually find Alyss and she had to admit, he looked amazing in the costume she'd left for him in his tent. She'd specifically asked that it be the opposite to her own blue and silver dress but she'd never anticipated what he would look like wearing it. The gold and red phoenix mask covered the scars across his handsome face completely, disguising him completely to anyone who hadn't spent thirteen years fighting alongside him for Wonderland's freedom. She had to admit though, he did look a little uncomfortable in the rich red and gold costume, but as soon as he saw her, he visibly relaxed.

Until she began leading him over to the dance area that is.

"Alyss, I'm really not comfortable with this. Are you - "

"Dodge" she laughed, turing to face him properly, "For once, just stop worrying about what everyone is thinking about us, relax and dance with me"