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TenchinoYami
10-18-2007, 03:08 PM
Princess in Purgatory: Prologue:
The chess pieces rose like columns of black death around her.
Pawns, rooks, knights, bishops and the rest stood in menacing glory
around their creator. Redd lowered her arms and surveyed what her
imagination had conjured.
Her crimson scepter flew through the ballroom doors and to her
hand as if drawn by an undeniable attraction. She smashed its base
onto the floor and immediatly thorny black vines spread like wild
fire. They crawled across the chess board floor and stalked up the
hard shells of the large chess set. The thorns imbedded themselves in
the frames of the puppets and a single rose blossomed where their
hearts should have been.
As the flowers of Black Imagination breahted life so did the new
creations. The vines vanished into nothingness as the chess board
army moved their limbs for the first time.
Redd slowly approached the Black King. She caressed his face
with her cold fingers.
"One day there will be a great war," she spoke. "On that day,
the pompous self-righteous rodents of the Queen's White Army will meet
their downfall. And you, my King, will deliver it to them."
With that she flicked her wrist as if to dismiss a frivilous idea
and all the chess pieces vanished. Redd had been planning her return
since the day her family stole her heritage from her and shipped her
off to the wretched Isolation Tower. She sat down as a grandiose
chair materialized behind her. In her minds eye she saw King Nolan
galloping across the Boarderland. An evil smirk crossed her face as
she shuffled air. Between his majesty and Heart Palace decks of card
soldiers appeared awaiting orders.
An intricate design began creating itself around Redd's chair.
It was the makings of a looking glass frame. The shiny reflective
surface of which was forming from the design and towards the angry
woman. She imagined seeing Heart Palace. Queen Genevieve, Princess
Alyss, Bibwit Harte, fwoosh!--she fell through the newly created
looking glass.
"Happy Birthday Alyss."

Dodge Anders King
10-19-2007, 09:50 AM
Great!

I love all the creativity in your writing. It's an excellent piece of fiction. Keep up the great job. Thanks for sharing it to us.

hatter pendragon
10-20-2007, 05:25 PM
I think there migh be a few technical things to work on, but a great start to the fanfic contributions, coolness!

As I am,

Hatter Pendragon

The Dark Hatter
11-09-2007, 01:39 PM
:cool: :cool: :cool: :cool:
This is awesome! you should seriously consider writing a novel!
(I am currently working on a book called, "The Dark Realms Trilogy," of which I have finished 160 pages. I bet ya'll would like it.)

Alyria_Bella
11-18-2007, 06:15 PM
:cool: Wicked Awesome

Alyss Heart
11-21-2007, 05:11 PM
Awesome!!!!

are_you_seeing_redd
01-30-2008, 04:21 PM
Love it! I'd definitely consider writing in my future if I was you ^_^

Lord of Spades
01-30-2008, 06:35 PM
very good:cool:, I agree with Hatter you should join us in the writing of our books^^:D

grdonathan
01-30-2008, 10:21 PM
Very well written, you have a wonderful affinity for description. It was dazzling. Two very enthusiastic thumbs up!

Mad_Hatter_Madigan
03-31-2008, 02:56 PM
Yah, this is good, check mine out, it's called The Valley of the Lost, hope that you like it... give me some feedback and let me know if it's even worth finishing! haha. Thanks! :)

rebeccacai
04-27-2010, 12:39 AM
Princess in Purgatory: Prologue:
The chess pieces rose like columns of black death around her.
Pawns, rooks, knights, bishops and the rest stood in menacing glory
around their creator. Redd lowered her arms and surveyed what her
imagination had conjured.
Her crimson scepter flew through the ballroom doors and to her
hand as if drawn by an undeniable attraction. She smashed its base
onto the floor and immediatly thorny black vines spread like wild
fire. They crawled across the chess board floor and stalked up the
hard shells of the large chess set. The thorns imbedded themselves in
the frames of the puppets and a single rose blossomed where their
hearts should have been.
As the flowers of Black Imagination breahted life so did the new
creations. The vines vanished into nothingness as the chess board
army moved their limbs for the first time.
Redd slowly approached the Black King. She caressed his face
with her cold fingers.
"One day there will be a great war," she spoke. "On that day,
the pompous self-righteous Nike dunks (http://www.9yco.com/) rodents of the Queen's White Army will meet
their downfall. And you, my King, will deliver it to them."
With that she flicked her wrist as if to dismiss a frivilous idea
and all the chess pieces vanished. Redd had been planning her return
since the day her family stole her heritage from her and shipped her
off to the wretched Isolation Tower. She sat down as a grandiose
chair materialized behind her. In her minds eye she saw King Nolan
galloping across the Boarderland. An evil smirk crossed her face as
she shuffled air. Between his majesty and Heart Palace decks of card
soldiers appeared awaiting orders.
An intricate design began creating itself around Redd's chair.
It was the makings of a looking glass frame. The shiny reflective
surface of which was forming from the design and towards the angry
woman. She imagined seeing Heart Palace. Queen Genevieve, Princess
Alyss, Bibwit Harte, fwoosh!--she fell through the newly created
looking glass.
"Happy Birthday Alyss."


thanks for sharing.it's a nice story.hmmm.:)
i am expecting your next post.

Heart Artemis Hunter
04-27-2010, 04:10 AM
this person doesn't come on anymore.....and this thread was dead. (not to be rude just telling you)
welcome to the forums.

kid milliner
04-27-2010, 05:36 AM
Awsome.............. Really it was