The Nightmare Before Looking Glass Wars

[McGeesJabberwock]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2958883/1/

and if that link doesn't work:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/38427622/

Feel free to give criticism and whatnot.

http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs11/i/2006/220/e/0/Nightmare_Before_LGW_Poster_by_SumPerson.jpg

[Sir_Vincent_of_Cheshire]

I read this and enjoyed it up until the characters started getting offed! Hatter Maddigan and all would have been cool to fight alongside Alice, and then to have Alyss learn the truth of what was going on, instead of killing Alice and going insane...that was a bit much in my mind. I also had a hard time following what was happening because of the style. I liked it, it just needs some tweaking to make it easier to follow!

[princessheart]

i began the story on deviant art and soon found it very twisting... im not so sure i rlly like that story but again that is only my personal opinion

[Madderthanahatter.]

That was pretty sweet I must say.

[The White Knight]

My Dreams have essentially become a portal to other worlds, Wonderland being one. I'll be writing my journies down ad eventually putting them up.

[McGeesJabberwock]

My Dreams have essentially become a portal to other worlds, Wonderland being one. I'll be writing my journies down ad eventually putting them up.

Have you been to Oz, Narnia or Middle Earth yet?

[The White Knight]

I've spent most my time in Wonderland, Agrabah, and Hollow Bastion. I visited Narnia briefly, but just to pick up some supplies, and talk to a few commoners. To describe part of my journey in wonderland.

Alice (or Alyss, as it were; it's a combination of all my wonderland readings): Did you get here through the pool of tears?
Myself: No I... Well, I might have. when did I appear here, exactly?
Alyss: Just now.
Myself: Ah, I see. Well... I suppose I have come through this pool of tears.
Alyss: And why are you here?
Myself: Well... why am I here?
Catepillar (who was in the room at the time, I just had not seen him): A magnificent question, if I must say. why are any of us here?

((I should get around to writing the rest down, alsewhere, probably on DA)

[dark_faerie_knight]

Catepillar (who was in the room at the time, I just had not seen him): A magnificent question, if I must say. why are any of us here?

i just like that qoute...:D
i went on deviant art and found it very appealing. interesting too. u should make it more easier to understand. stick with an easy plot and then go ahead and twist it. it was great tho.

have u [knight] been to the unseelie court yet? ;)

[Alyss of Hearts]

Double on that

[frankie]

cool sites. wher did u get them from?

[master of gray]

your story is great! its so great that i want more!
i heard there was a sequel and i read it. awsome!:) :D :D
you know i feel like doing a "Fan sequel" to your story but i thought i would ask you first since it might offend you. if you don't answer for a long time i WILL post it(with apologies of course) and if yes i will post it up( with thanks and stuff like that) and if no i won't post it. as you are reading this, you are probaly getting VERY VERY VERY angry at this, but needed to say this or i will go *insane*. Sorry if i made you mad.

good job on the story
"fan sequel of fan fiction" yea

[Mad Hatter]

My Dreams have essentially become a portal to other worlds, Wonderland being one. I'll be writing my journies down ad eventually putting them up.

I wonder. So where exactly have you been? I think I'm going to do the same. It sounds like an interesting adventure. Who knows, it may make for a cool book later on. Maybe we could map our journeys. or maybe I'm as mad as my name indicates. Of course I will only go on my adventure if you don't mind. I hope I'm not stealing any thunder. I just thought it sounded like a lot of fun

[The Dark Hatter]

This poem is deliciously twisted! Ryhmes well, and well written. Love it. (-:
:cool: :cool: :cool:

[Heart Artemis Hunter]

it's awesome! great work! but my brain hurts now.... XD sorry, i'm just really tired, but i loved the story!!!!!!