FanFiction Story. Need Characters!

[HatterMusic]

Hi everyone,
Since lately I've had an addiction to the forums and LGW in general, I'm going to write a FanFiction for FanFiction.net. But, I don't want to use the characters from LGW, so thats where OCs come in (OC = Original Character, if you don't know). If you do create a character that I can use, please follow these guidelines:
Name:
Age:
Height:
Gender:
Occupation: (Milliner, Citizen, Chess Piece, Card, etc)
Personality:
Appearance: (You can add a link to a picture or put a picture here)
History:
Special Abilities: (if you have any, its not necessary)
And anything else you want to add. Make sure that you add lots of details though, because if I do not have enough details I won't be able to use your OC without asking about a million questions. The first few people to post will be more main characters while others will be more background characters. I only put it that way because it makes it easier on me to not choose who will be more main characters, but as just who posts quicker. PM me for any questions.
And since I just have a feeling that this might be coming, I will have my own OC for the FanFiction. Except I'm not going to post anything about them. *smiles evily* Heheheheheh.
Oh and my username on FanFiction is camokass. =] I'll make sure to post the link to the FanFic too.

[ReadingChick]

...Query. If the main characters are OCs, why bother making it a fanfiction at all? Why not just write an original story?

Second query, is this for LGW, or some other section?

[HatterMusic]

...Query. If the main characters are OCs, why bother making it a fanfiction at all? Why not just write an original story?

Second query, is this for LGW, or some other section?

Well, because I don't really feel like using the original characters and then there are actually people that do use OCs as their main characters. I have two FanFiction stories as it is with just OCs as the main characters.

This is based on LGW.

I will use the characters from LGW also, just more as background characters rather than main. I have a main main character I would like to use already, but I would also like a few more main characters that are like... I don't know how to explain it... use Harry Potter as an example, Harry is the main character, Ron and Hermione aren't exactly main characters, but also not background characters either like Fred and George or Mrs. Weasly.

The reason I would like others to help me create OCs is because I tend to only create characters with around the same personalities. If you do wish to create an OC for me, I will give all credit of that OC to you and not take it for myself as my own OC.

[Dragongirlj]

Ohh! Sounds cool.

May I enter one? My character is more like a background character from the story that I wanted to elaborate on a bit. Is that okay?

[The Hattertant]

And I have an interesting antagonist, if you need one. XP *pokes Dragongirl* ...*giggles*

[HatterMusic]

Ohh! Sounds cool.

May I enter one? My character is more like a background character from the story that I wanted to elaborate on a bit. Is that okay?

Yes, you may enter a character. Haha. No need to ask. =] And, yes, that is okay.


And I have an interesting antagonist, if you need one. XP *pokes Dragongirl* ...*giggles*

Yeah, I do actually. Haha. =]

[Dragongirlj]

And I have an interesting antagonist, if you need one. XP *pokes Dragongirl* ...*giggles*

*pokes* I wouldn't know who that guy would be? :D

[Dragongirlj]

Yes, you may enter a character. Haha. No need to ask. =] And, yes, that is okay.


Awesomesauce, *gets to drawing insanely on character*

It's the surgeon from the first book, by the way. She doubles as the nurse and somewhat of a teacher for the younger members of what was the resistance camp...

^-^ I'm having fun creating her.

[ReadingChick]

Well, because I don't really feel like using the original characters and then there are actually people that do use OCs as their main characters. I have two FanFiction stories as it is with just OCs as the main characters.

This is based on LGW.

I will use the characters from LGW also, just more as background characters rather than main. I have a main main character I would like to use already, but I would also like a few more main characters that are like... I don't know how to explain it... use Harry Potter as an example, Harry is the main character, Ron and Hermione aren't exactly main characters, but also not background characters either like Fred and George or Mrs. Weasly.

The reason I would like others to help me create OCs is because I tend to only create characters with around the same personalities. If you do wish to create an OC for me, I will give all credit of that OC to you and not take it for myself as my own OC.

Allow me to offer a few words of warning, bearing in mind that I'm not trying to offend, only to help.

I've been writing fanfiction since I was twelve (I'm eighteen now), and in my experience it is very, very difficult to write an OC-centred story that will be popular. By and large, people want to read about the main characters. This is not ALWAYS the case, but it often is. That's the first word of warning.

The second is that if you do go ahead and write this - and if I'm correct in guessing that this is not just going to be a day-to-day minor-conflict-that-wouldn't-attract-the-attention-of-the-mains story - you'll be walking a fine line in terms of plausibility. Keep in mind what kind of event would make the main canon characters step in, and also what they can do. Having OCs that overshadow the mains is something of a recipe for disaster.

I wish you the best kind of luck.

[Hatter Blade]

Allow me to offer a few words of warning, bearing in mind that I'm not trying to offend, only to help.

I've been writing fanfiction since I was twelve (I'm eighteen now), and in my experience it is very, very difficult to write an OC-centred story that will be popular. By and large, people want to read about the main characters. This is not ALWAYS the case, but it often is. That's the first word of warning.

The second is that if you do go ahead and write this - and if I'm correct in guessing that this is not just going to be a day-to-day minor-conflict-that-wouldn't-attract-the-attention-of-the-mains story - you'll be walking a fine line in terms of plausibility. Keep in mind what kind of event would make the main canon characters step in, and also what they can do. Having OCs that overshadow the mains is something of a recipe for disaster.

I wish you the best kind of luck.

*sarcastically appalled* Why ReadingChick, you sound as if you're about to go drearily strolling through a shopping center on a search for a depressing outfit for a funeral regarding someone still living.

Plainly putting it, your post sounds like you're assuming everything because you believe you are the most experienced writer on this entire Forum, because you have been writing since you were twelve and are now a lovely young age of eighteen. Not that I doubt your experiences, of course. I do have to agree with you, it is rather... interesting to see the outcome of an original character story, but not always must they be entirely horrible and mundane.

I'd say that Hatter Music is well aware of the challenges, but simply wishes to write anyways simply because she so wants to do so. Perhaps she is not writing for a popularity contest as others might. Perhaps she is writing simply for her own amusement, not caring about how much people will approve of it. *smirks* I assume, but if I am to so assume, at least I give writers a hint of positivity.

Either way, I don't see why she can't at least make an attempt to write before you throw your negativity at her. You can’t succeed without first making an effort. Don't throw the white sheet over someone who is sleeping.

[HatterMusic]

Allow me to offer a few words of warning, bearing in mind that I'm not trying to offend, only to help.

I've been writing fanfiction since I was twelve (I'm eighteen now), and in my experience it is very, very difficult to write an OC-centred story that will be popular. By and large, people want to read about the main characters. This is not ALWAYS the case, but it often is. That's the first word of warning.

The second is that if you do go ahead and write this - and if I'm correct in guessing that this is not just going to be a day-to-day minor-conflict-that-wouldn't-attract-the-attention-of-the-mains story - you'll be walking a fine line in terms of plausibility. Keep in mind what kind of event would make the main canon characters step in, and also what they can do. Having OCs that overshadow the mains is something of a recipe for disaster.

I wish you the best kind of luck.


*sarcastically appalled* Why ReadingChick, you sound as if you're about to go drearily strolling through a shopping center on a search for a depressing outfit for a funeral regarding someone still living.

Plainly putting it, your post sounds like you're assuming everything because you believe you are the most experienced writer on this entire Forum, because you have been writing since you were twelve and are now a lovely young age of eighteen. Not that I doubt your experiences, of course. I do have to agree with you, it is rather... interesting to see the outcome of an original character story, but not always must they be entirely horrible and mundane.

I'd say that Hatter Music is well aware of the challenges, but simply wishes to write anyways simply because she so wants to do so. Perhaps she is not writing for a popularity contest as others might. Perhaps she is writing simply for her own amusement, not caring about how much people will approve of it. *smirks* I assume, but if I am to so assume, at least I give writers a hint of positivity.

Either way, I don't see why she can't at least make an attempt to write before you throw your negativity at her. You can’t succeed without first making an effort. Don't throw the white sheet over someone who is sleeping.

Thank you Blade for backing me up, but I think I could have handled this myself. =]

As for the advice ReadingChick, I have already taken both of those 'tips' into mind. I do already have an original character based FanFiction and even though I only have a couple of chapters up, I can tell that not many people pay attention to the original character FanFictions. I also really don't care if the FanFiction is popular or not, to me its just getting my ideas out there and practicing my writing skills so that I can write a book when I'm older, which is pretty much my dream job. But, thank you for pointing those out anyways.

And (yes, I know you aren't supposed to start a sentence with 'and', I just don't know how else to start it), if I do get any negative reviews/comments on FanFiction/LGW Forums, I normally take it positivily (? I don't know how to spell that) and use it to improve my writing. Also, just so that people know, I am currently 12 and even though I just started posting FanFiction, I have been writing stories and other such things since I was 9. So I've technically been writing for three years already. Just thought that I would add that. :p

[ReadingChick]

Plainly putting it, your post sounds like you're assuming everything because you believe you are the most experienced writer on this entire Forum, because you have been writing since you were twelve and are now a lovely young age of eighteen. Not that I doubt your experiences, of course. I do have to agree with you, it is rather... interesting to see the outcome of an original character story, but not always must they be entirely horrible and mundane.

That wasn't what I said, and that wasn't what I was assuming. I apologize for the tone. My only excuse is that I've been working on an essay all weekend and it has really worn me out. I'm definitely not thinking as clearly as I should be.


Thank you Blade for backing me up, but I think I could have handled this myself. =]

As for the advice ReadingChick, I have already taken both of those 'tips' into mind. I do already have an original character based FanFiction and even though I only have a couple of chapters up, I can tell that not many people pay attention to the original character FanFictions. I also really don't care if the FanFiction is popular or not, to me its just getting my ideas out there and practicing my writing skills so that I can write a book when I'm older, which is pretty much my dream job. But, thank you for pointing those out anyways.

And (yes, I know you aren't supposed to start a sentence with 'and', I just don't know how else to start it), if I do get any negative reviews/comments on FanFiction/LGW Forums, I normally take it positivily (? I don't know how to spell that) and use it to improve my writing. Also, just so that people know, I am currently 12 and even though I just started posting FanFiction, I have been writing stories and other such things since I was 9. So I've technically been writing for three years already. Just thought that I would add that. :p

As I said, it wasn't my intention to offend, and I'm sorry for giving advice that you've already taken to heart. It's not...common...for people your age to think so carefully about this topic, and it's great that you are. :) And as I said to Blade above, I wasn't trying to suggest that I was the most experienced writer on this forum or even that I was better than you. There are plenty of people much more inexperienced that could kick my butt when it comes to writing. It was a stupid thing to say, and I'm sorry about that.

[kid milliner]

Name:lun

gender: female

hight:4'00
age:14
occupation: uknown

special abillities:tells good from evil even though blind, manipulates water

apperance: thin little girl with long black hair and midnight blue eyes wares long white silk bed dress
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name:Chorneey

age:over 5000 appers to be 40
hight:7'02
occupation: gardian
gender:male
special abilities:blends in with shdows and darkness, flight, transforms into wolf, invisibity, and can kill with out moving, is dead

apperance: wares all black uniform looks like mixture of anciant samari and
milliner large black wing that appers and disappers when needed to wares white porcelin mask on face...short black hair

[HatterMusic]

Name:lun

gender: female

hight:4'00
age:14
occupation: uknown

special abillities:tells good from evil even though blind, manipulates water

apperance: thin little girl with long black hair and midnight blue eyes wares long white silk bed dress
----------------___

name:Chorneey

age:over 5000 appers to be 40
hight:7'02
occupation: gardian
gender:male
special abilities:blends in with shdows and darkness, flight, transforms into wolf, invisibity, and can kill with out moving, is dead

apperance: wares all black uniform looks like mixture of anciant samari and
milliner large black wing that appers and disappers when needed to wares white porcelin mask on face...short black hair

Thanks for entering characters. =] But, I'm going to need more detail on history and personality. Also, I've had Hatter Blade request for your second character that there aren't any wings.

[kid milliner]

Thanks for entering characters. =] But, I'm going to need more detail on history and personality. Also, I've had Hatter Blade request for your second character that there aren't any wings.

Oh who cares what he says they're my charechters

[Hatter Blade]

Oh who cares what he says they're my charechters

*smiles* I care. Heh heh. *activates wings and fans them out before letting them fade away*

[HatterMusic]

Oh who cares what he says they're my charechters

You spelt characters wrong. =\ Just thought I would point that out.


*smiles* I care. Heh heh. *activates wings and fans them out before letting them fade away*

And, Blade, no fighting.

To both of you, how about you just make a deal? We'll tweak kid milliner's character's wings untill both of you are happy.... and I will continue to negotiate untill I have a legitimate reason to fight about this.

[Hatter Blade]

And, Blade, no fighting.

To both of you, how about you just make a deal? We'll tweak kid milliner's character's wings untill both of you are happy.... and I will continue to negotiate untill I legitimate reason to fight about this.

*puts hands up* Myself? Fighting? *appalled* I would never!


....Hatter Music, you spelled 'until' wrong.

[HatterMusic]

*puts hands up* Myself? Fighting? *appalled* I would never!


....Hatter Music, you spelled 'until' wrong.

=.=' Sure you wouldn't fight... and I forgot how to spell it! =\

[kid milliner]

You spelt characters wrong. =\ Just thought I would point that out.



And, Blade, no fighting.

To both of you, how about you just make a deal? We'll tweak kid milliner's character's wings untill both of you are happy.... and I will continue to negotiate untill I have a legitimate reason to fight about this.

Chorneey only has one wing and he's the guy I made for my boyfriend.... Who's name is chorneey

[HatterMusic]

Chorneey only has one wing and he's the guy I made for my boyfriend.... Who's name is chorneey

Is that good enough for you Blade??

[kid milliner]

HM I have their hystory posted on you profile page

[Mimsy]

Chorneey only has one wing and he's the guy I made for my boyfriend.... Who's name is chorneey

It sounds too much like Final Fantasy VII to me. >>
Anybody who played it would know about Sephiroth and his one wing.

[kid milliner]

I dun liek the new ff games I liek the old ones and I hate sepiroth oh god Chorneey just farted I think I'm gonna die

[HatterMusic]

HM I have their hystory posted on you profile page

I know. ^_^


Anybody who played it would know about Sephiroth and his one wing.

... I've never played FF. Well, the first and second one on GameBoy... Heheheh. But I plan to try them out when I can rent them. =] ... Wait... is FF available on Wii? ._.

[kid milliner]

On the wii store mabey

[Hatter Blade]

Is that good enough for you Blade??

I have no comment.

[kid milliner]

Aw hug? *hugs blade*

[HatterMusic]

I have no comment.

Your the one that complained in the first place. =.='


Aw hug? *hugs blade*

*thinks to self* Can't wait for the reaction from this. :rolleyes:

[Hatter Blade]

Aw hug? *hugs blade*

*activates wings and instantly shoves away* Don't you dare touch me, you insufferable miscreation.

*leaves*

[kid milliner]

*sniff* *tearsup* meanie

[HatterMusic]

*activates wings and instantly shoves away* Don't you dare touch me, you insufferable miscreation.

*leaves*

*throws a few daggers at Blade before he can leave*


*sniff* *tearsup* meanie

*smirks* I thought that something like this would happen. :rolleyes:

*hugs kid milliner* Tis okay. =] That would be HatterBlade's reaction to anyone that hugged him... or his reaction would be anything along those lines anyways. Haha.

[kid milliner]

Chorneey: if he ever does that again i'm ripping his wings off and shoving the up his-!

Lun: chorneey!

[Mimsy]

Chorneey: if he ever does that again i'm ripping his wings off and shoving the up his-!

Lun: chorneey!

Again. You do that and I will show you no mercy. He's my friend, and you should of ask him before hugging him in the first place. It's call being polite.

[kid milliner]

He dosen't have to be so mean..............

[Mimsy]

He dosen't have to be so mean..............

Then just leave him alone. =/
It's really simple.

[kid milliner]

Jenna is getting spounge bath she will be back in 30 min

[Mimsy]

Jenna is getting spounge bath she will be back in 30 min

Um, okay? =/
I don't see how's that important to know.

[kid milliner]

................

[HatterMusic]

._____________. Well, this post is starting to turn into a chat-type-ish... thing rather than a OC creation post. Hehe. ^_^'

[Mimsy]

._____________. Well, this post is starting to turn into a chat-type-ish... thing rather than a OC creation post. Hehe. ^_^'

Oops! My bad. :o
I'm very sorry about that.

[kid milliner]

Sorry hm! Really I am

[The Hattertant]

Name: Alcindor Necromedes III (originally Richard William) ...(thank you to HM_F for supplying the name of Richard, and to Hatter Fan for supplying the name of William! *hugs them* they are awesome. =D)

Age: 26

Height: 6'4"

Gender: Male

Occupation: Ex-Milliner; self-elected leader of a Black Imagination gang, an anti-government league of assassins.

Personality: Smart, clever, prepared and well-planned; always takes precautions. Loyal to himself and others around him, also has honor. Sensible and humane, though prone to intense feelings of rage and bitterness, also envy as well; his bitter emotions often times counteract his positive qualities, though his positive qualities are rarely far away. He is a person full of intense emotion, yet his actions do not yield half as much emotion as the feelings that devised them.

He is also a very soft spoken person, speaking slowly and deliberately, always knowing what he is talking about and always knowing what he is doing. He does not curse and he rarely raises his voice. He believes that actions speak better than words, and that loud words only distract from the meaning of the words themselves.

Alcindor's main goal is unknown, but he still remains a tragic protagonist type, misplaced and put in the position of a bitter antagonist. (I just refer to him as a pro-antagonist. =P)

He would also never plot any direct harm against the Queen because of his instinctive morals of a being a Milliner, only targeting members of Parliament and other high-up government officials.

History: LONG. ^_^

(Thank you to Dragongirl for contributing awesome history ideas! *hugs her* like her ideas, she too is awesome. =D Also thank you to HM_F, again, and to Mimsy as well, for being the first beta audience for Alcindor's history. they got a big long story time. hehe. thank you, guys! *hugs HM_F, again, and Mimsy too*)

Richard is an ex-Milliner who happened to be, well, ex'd from the Millinery. When he was 18, almost ready to get his Hat, he killed his own instructor in a training accident. But his rival classmate, Sloan, framed Richard, having said he saw the "accident" and that Richard purposely killed the instructor out of rage and on purpose.

Seeing no proof to claim otherwise, the Board comes to a conclusion: Richard is kicked out of the Millinery. He is dismissed coldly without any chance of redemption and he is sentenced to prison, but fearing for his survival and for his future, he manages to escape from the Academy beforehand. Living as a runaway, he is thrown into a homeless, poor state of living in the slums of Wondertropolis.

Over the next several years he becomes increasingly angry and bitter at what Sloan had done and how the Millinery had believed it. Eventually he comes into contact with a Black Imagination gang, where his expertise in weapons and his overall skill made him essential to their shady dealings. Not knowing where else to go, he agrees to side with them and joins their ranks.

One night Richard speaks to a senior member of the gang, Erik Rilen. He tells Richard that the leader of the clan, named Alcindor Necromedes II, had a missing son and that is what lead him to bitterness and anger that allowed him to lead the clan. Richard is shocked; the story matches completely with his own father, who had been supposedly been killed during Redd's 13 year rule along with his mother. But his father, still alive... and the leader of this Black Imagination gang? Again filling with rage and hate, Richard plots to assassinate the leader of the clan, his father, for having been alive all this time but not once having thought to find his long lost son who had struggled for countless years as an orphan.

As Richard moves up in rank, he gets closer and closer to fulfilling his mission of killing his father who he thinks is complete evil for deserting him. Soon he is high enough rank and has enough skill to go on important group missions... Now 23, one night, Richard and three other gang members, along with Necromedes II, go on a 'hunting trip'. (The gang often hunts out Milliners and kills them, stealing their Hat and weapons and selling them for a sky-high price, which is in turn used to pay for illicit drugs and weaponry. They may also hold up other random people after killing a Milliner, further adding to their spoils.)

As they find a lone Milliner out and about and begin following him, Richard moves toward the back of the group. He does not want to be recognized in case the mission fails, which it might just do. Richard isn't stupid; trained as a Milliner, he takes plenty precautions. The Milliner they follow is taking a strange route, for a Milliner. Richard doesn't feel that it's right, and he looks at the other gang members. They don't seem phased by the strangeness... And all at once, five other Milliners ambush them from the sides.

Unused to fighting against other Milliners, Richard's morals force him to only defend instead of fighting back to kill them. The three other gang members are quickly injured, killed, leaving only Richard and Necromedes II. Seeing his comrades fall, Richard snaps out of it and then begins killing. He's skilled at it and yet humane; he kills them effortlessly, quickly and neatly as any assassin would. Along the way, he takes note that these Milliners seem rather young. It must be their first night out from the Academy and they spotted the suspicious group...

Soon there is only one Milliner left; Richard can tell that this one was the oldest and most skilled of the group. Necromedes II motions for Richard to stand back; slightly cocky and arrogant, he thinks he can handle the Milliner by himself. But at the last moment, Richard recognizes the Milliner standing before him as Sloan. His anger suddenly spikes and he steps forward, pushing his father out of the way and charging at the Milliner. Richard quickly disposes of him; in a blurry motion, he stabs the un-anticipating Sloan through the ribs with a swiftly drawn sword. Then he turns to face his father with a scowl of hatred, as Sloan slumped to the ground. Still in his anger, Richard unholsters a crystal shooter from his back and blasts a spray of crystal shot into the man.

The deed is done. Taking a moment to stand there in silence, Richard then simply collects the Hats from the fallen Milliners and takes all their weapons and their uniforms. He begins to leave, but he looks back at Sloan. His rival is still alive, wheezing for breath as he chokes on his own blood. Richard raises his crystal shooter and shoots him several more times, ending his agony.

Richard takes the sword from his fallen father as well as his long flowing cape. He puts them on himself as he heads back to the main gang hideout, holding the sword in hand and devising a plan to kill every other pitiful member of the filthy gang his father lead.

The members stare at him as he arrives. Though he didn't realize it before, he was spattered with blood, not any of it his own. They see Richard has their old leader's cape and sword. Suddenly they call him the leader of the clan, he having taken the sword and cape of their last leader, the only way to do so is to have killed him.

Realizing his position, Richard proclaims himself Alcindor Necromedes III, the new leader of the Black Imaginationist gang. Where else would he go if not within the clan? He, a Millinery outcast said to have killed his instructor, he who killed several Milliners. he who's already part of a Black Imagination gang. And without a leader, the lives of the people within the gang would be meaningless, and they would fall into despair and disarray, wreaking unorganized havoc in the slums of Wondertropolis.

Why have unorganized havoc when one can plan it and perfect it?

Over the next three years, Alcindor Necromedes III reorganizes the entire structure of the clan, retraining members to become full fledged assassins and soldiers, weaning them off of imagination stimulants and instead tilting their goals towards expert killing, looting and pickpocketing, using the money to still buy weapons and drugs.

The drugs that Alcindor's clan does buy are sold again at a much higher price to lower Black Imagination gangs willing to do anything for the stimulants... this allows Alcindor to easily manipulate lower gangs if he so wishes, for example, sending them on a mission he does not want his own, valuable and well-trained men to risk their lives for... or if he sends men from a lower gang on a mission where he is well aware that they will all perish, simply because Alcindor has hidden feelings of disgust towards Black Imaginationists.




...And that is Alcindor Necromedes III. :) yes. that's it. (if there's any typos in there.. my bad. XP) it's up to Music to come up with more and fit him into the story if she wishes. =D

last but not least:

Appearance: FWA-LA!! (http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/111/3/6/ALCINDOR_NECROMEDES_III_by_Fangrah.jpg) <---click. yes. do it. XD i worked hard on that drawing. *nods*

so there you go, Music! I hope you enjoy this lovely pro-antagonist and can somehow put him to good use in a story. ^_^

[kid milliner]

Cool.........

[HatterMusic]

Oops! My bad. :o
I'm very sorry about that.


Sorry hm! Really I am

It's okay. Haha. Just, take it somewhere else next time. =]


Name: Alcindor Necromedes III (originally Richard William) ...(thank you to HM_F for supplying the name of Richard, and to Hatter Fan for supplying the name of William! *hugs them* they are awesome. =D)

Age: 26

Height: 6'4"

Gender: Male

Occupation: Ex-Milliner; self-elected leader of a Black Imagination gang, an anti-government league of assassins.

Personality: Smart, clever, prepared and well-planned; always takes precautions. Loyal to himself and others around him, also has honor. Sensible and humane, though prone to intense feelings of rage and bitterness, also envy as well; his bitter emotions often times counteract his positive qualities, though his positive qualities are rarely far away. He is a person full of intense emotion, yet his actions do not yield half as much emotion as the feelings that devised them.

He is also a very soft spoken person, speaking slowly and deliberately, always knowing what he is talking about and always knowing what he is doing. He does not curse and he rarely raises his voice. He believes that actions speak better than words, and that loud words only distract from the meaning of the words themselves.

Alcindor's main goal is unknown, but he still remains a tragic protagonist type, misplaced and put in the position of a bitter antagonist. (I just refer to him as a pro-antagonist. =P)

He would also never plot any direct harm against the Queen because of his instinctive morals of a being a Milliner, only targeting members of Parliament and other high-up government officials.

History: LONG. ^_^

(Thank you to Dragongirl for contributing awesome history ideas! *hugs her* like her ideas, she too is awesome. =D Also thank you to HM_F, again, and to Mimsy as well, for being the first beta audience for Alcindor's history. they got a big long story time. hehe. thank you, guys! *hugs HM_F, again, and Mimsy too*)

Richard is an ex-Milliner who happened to be, well, ex'd from the Millinery. When he was 18, almost ready to get his Hat, he killed his own instructor in a training accident. But his rival classmate, Sloan, framed Richard, having said he saw the "accident" and that Richard purposely killed the instructor out of rage and on purpose.

Seeing no proof to claim otherwise, the Board comes to a conclusion: Richard is kicked out of the Millinery. He is dismissed coldly without any chance of redemption and he is sentenced to prison, but fearing for his survival and for his future, he manages to escape from the Academy beforehand. Living as a runaway, he is thrown into a homeless, poor state of living in the slums of Wondertropolis.

Over the next several years he becomes increasingly angry and bitter at what Sloan had done and how the Millinery had believed it. Eventually he comes into contact with a Black Imagination gang, where his expertise in weapons and his overall skill made him essential to their shady dealings. Not knowing where else to go, he agrees to side with them and joins their ranks.

One night Richard speaks to a senior member of the gang, Erik Rilen. He tells Richard that the leader of the clan, named Alcindor Necromedes II, had a missing son and that is what lead him to bitterness and anger that allowed him to lead the clan. Richard is shocked; the story matches completely with his own father, who had been supposedly been killed during Redd's 13 year rule along with his mother. But his father, still alive... and the leader of this Black Imagination gang? Again filling with rage and hate, Richard plots to assassinate the leader of the clan, his father, for having been alive all this time but not once having thought to find his long lost son who had struggled for countless years as an orphan.

As Richard moves up in rank, he gets closer and closer to fulfilling his mission of killing his father who he thinks is complete evil for deserting him. Soon he is high enough rank and has enough skill to go on important group missions... Now 23, one night, Richard and three other gang members, along with Necromedes II, go on a 'hunting trip'. (The gang often hunts out Milliners and kills them, stealing their Hat and weapons and selling them for a sky-high price, which is in turn used to pay for illicit drugs and weaponry. They may also hold up other random people after killing a Milliner, further adding to their spoils.)

As they find a lone Milliner out and about and begin following him, Richard moves toward the back of the group. He does not want to be recognized in case the mission fails, which it might just do. Richard isn't stupid; trained as a Milliner, he takes plenty precautions. The Milliner they follow is taking a strange route, for a Milliner. Richard doesn't feel that it's right, and he looks at the other gang members. They don't seem phased by the strangeness... And all at once, five other Milliners ambush them from the sides.

Unused to fighting against other Milliners, Richard's morals force him to only defend instead of fighting back to kill them. The three other gang members are quickly injured, killed, leaving only Richard and Necromedes II. Seeing his comrades fall, Richard snaps out of it and then begins killing. He's skilled at it and yet humane; he kills them effortlessly, quickly and neatly as any assassin would. Along the way, he takes note that these Milliners seem rather young. It must be their first night out from the Academy and they spotted the suspicious group...

Soon there is only one Milliner left; Richard can tell that this one was the oldest and most skilled of the group. Necromedes II motions for Richard to stand back; slightly cocky and arrogant, he thinks he can handle the Milliner by himself. But at the last moment, Richard recognizes the Milliner standing before him as Sloan. His anger suddenly spikes and he steps forward, pushing his father out of the way and charging at the Milliner. Richard quickly disposes of him; in a blurry motion, he stabs the un-anticipating Sloan through the ribs with a swiftly drawn sword. Then he turns to face his father with a scowl of hatred, as Sloan slumped to the ground. Still in his anger, Richard unholsters a crystal shooter from his back and blasts a spray of crystal shot into the man.

The deed is done. Taking a moment to stand there in silence, Richard then simply collects the Hats from the fallen Milliners and takes all their weapons and their uniforms. He begins to leave, but he looks back at Sloan. His rival is still alive, wheezing for breath as he chokes on his own blood. Richard raises his crystal shooter and shoots him several more times, ending his agony.

Richard takes the sword from his fallen father as well as his long flowing cape. He puts them on himself as he heads back to the main gang hideout, holding the sword in hand and devising a plan to kill every other pitiful member of the filthy gang his father lead.

The members stare at him as he arrives. Though he didn't realize it before, he was spattered with blood, not any of it his own. They see Richard has their old leader's cape and sword. Suddenly they call him the leader of the clan, he having taken the sword and cape of their last leader, the only way to do so is to have killed him.

Realizing his position, Richard proclaims himself Alcindor Necromedes III, the new leader of the Black Imaginationist gang. Where else would he go if not within the clan? He, a Millinery outcast said to have killed his instructor, he who killed several Milliners. he who's already part of a Black Imagination gang. And without a leader, the lives of the people within the gang would be meaningless, and they would fall into despair and disarray, wreaking unorganized havoc in the slums of Wondertropolis.

Why have unorganized havoc when one can plan it and perfect it?

Over the next three years, Alcindor Necromedes III reorganizes the entire structure of the clan, retraining members to become full fledged assassins and soldiers, weaning them off of imagination stimulants and instead tilting their goals towards expert killing, looting and pickpocketing, using the money to still buy weapons and drugs.

The drugs that Alcindor's clan does buy are sold again at a much higher price to lower Black Imagination gangs willing to do anything for the stimulants... this allows Alcindor to easily manipulate lower gangs if he so wishes, for example, sending them on a mission he does not want his own, valuable and well-trained men to risk their lives for... or if he sends men from a lower gang on a mission where he is well aware that they will all perish, simply because Alcindor has hidden feelings of disgust towards Black Imaginationists.




...And that is Alcindor Necromedes III. :) yes. that's it. (if there's any typos in there.. my bad. XP) it's up to Music to come up with more and fit him into the story if she wishes. =D

last but not least:

Appearance: FWA-LA!! (http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/111/3/6/ALCINDOR_NECROMEDES_III_by_Fangrah.jpg) <---click. yes. do it. XD i worked hard on that drawing. *nods*

so there you go, Music! I hope you enjoy this lovely pro-antagonist and can somehow put him to good use in a story. ^_^

O.O THATS WHAT I CALL DETAIL! Haha. ^_^ Thanks for entering the character. I'm really not quite sure what side I'll put him on in the end, but... *shrugs* I'll figure that out. Thats a really good drawing too! :D I'm going to add a shirt on him when I write though. Haha.

[kid milliner]

Mine are going to be in the fanfic too right

[HatterMusic]

Mine are going to be in the fanfic too right

Of course! =] I wouldn't just ask for characters and then not use them. That would be mean... and rude... and... you know what? I could probably list a lot of words that sit along the lines of 'rude' and 'mean', so I'm just going to shut up now. Haha.


To Everyone Submitting Characters: I will try my best to use the characters submitted, but some may be more background characters than main. Well, this is if more people submit characters. =\ As of right now I have three characters and one that I'm technically waiting for. Oh! Its actually four characters as of right now including my own. =] I will post a drawing of my character when I can get one done along with a description. ^_^

[kid milliner]

Of course! =] I wouldn't just ask for characters and then not use them. That would be mean... and rude... and... you know what? I could probably list a lot of words that sit along the lines of 'rude' and 'mean', so I'm just going to shut up now. Haha.

Awsome I finally came up with their person alities

lun: shy often confused and kind likes chorneey

chorneey: strict and no sense of humore has feelings developed for lun

[HatterMusic]

Awsome I finally came up with their person alities

lun: shy often confused and kind likes chorneey

chorneey: strict and no sense of humore has feelings developed for lun

Cool. ^_^ Thanks.

[kid milliner]

Your welcome !!!!!! :D

[The Hattertant]

O.O THATS WHAT I CALL DETAIL! Haha. ^_^ Thanks for entering the character. I'm really not quite sure what side I'll put him on in the end, but... *shrugs* I'll figure that out. Thats a really good drawing too! :D I'm going to add a shirt on him when I write though. Haha.

^_^!!! *wiggles*

Thank you thank you! ^_^ i'm very proud of Alcindor. XD

as for him wearing a shirt... awwwwww. darn it. LOL! oh well. =) i'm just happy you liked my detail enough to put your appreciation in all caps! I know that detail is always important and i tried my best... ;) if you need any other characters, give me a holler. XD

[HatterMusic]

^_^!!! *wiggles*

Thank you thank you! ^_^ i'm very proud of Alcindor. XD

as for him wearing a shirt... awwwwww. darn it. LOL! oh well. =) i'm just happy you liked my detail enough to put your appreciation in all caps! I know that detail is always important and i tried my best... ;) if you need any other characters, give me a holler. XD

^_^ (I absolutely love that face!)

Alcindor is an awesome character. Haha. =]

Haha. Shirt-less gang leader? lol. Odd way of putting it, but its true. ^_^ And I will give you a holler if I need more characters! ^_^

Finally got ArchEnemy today! =D *continues to read*

[Dragongirlj]

^-^ Haha! I was helpful!!! XD But seriously, nice description, Hattertant, I definitly like it better the way you wrote it.

Hatter Music, I'm working on my character, I have a picture ready to be put up....but my computer has gone missing due to the fact that I don't "communicate properly" with my family and I have been grounded for an unknown amount of time.

Anyways, once I figure out a way to get my computer back, I will make sure I put it up pronto!

[HatterMusic]

^-^ Haha! I was helpful!!! XD But seriously, nice description, Hattertant, I definitly like it better the way you wrote it.

Hatter Music, I'm working on my character, I have a picture ready to be put up....but my computer has gone missing due to the fact that I don't "communicate properly" with my family and I have been grounded for an unknown amount of time.

Anyways, once I figure out a way to get my computer back, I will make sure I put it up pronto!

Okay. ^_^ I'm patient.

[Dragongirlj]

Image at http://pdragongirlj.deviantart.com/art/Looking-Glass-Wars-OC-162869670

Name: Dara Kolt

Age: 24

Height: 5 ft

Gender: female

Occupation: Medical Personnel

Personality: Never speaks...at all. She takes her job a little too seriously, allowing no time for anything else other than furthering her medical expertise. She hates being around loud areas and in darkness. She smiles a lot and is warm to many but never bothers to know any of the people around her. She has learned how to speak through body language quiet fluently. She's horrible at fighting.

History: Dara was only 11 years old when she saw her mentor, the head surgeon at the Resistance Camp, die at the hands of a Glass Eye. She lost the want to speak after her mentor’s death, feeling that silence imitated the stone-coldness of her mentor’s personality. She quickly surpassed her mentor’s ability through her endless efforts to be the best and became Head Surgeon of the Resistance Camp. Still, this was not good enough for her so she kept reading, accidently forgetting her own nutrition, thus making herself resemble a skeleton. This extreme amount of studying though, though, gave her the ability to finish any job she takes on within a matter of minutes. She then took to studying a few ways of self-defense when she found she was running low on medical items to study. She soon learned that it's a tricky thing to do and is unable to hold her own in most fights. This pushes her to learn harder, but she seems blocked from learning anything more.

Special Abilities: She can heal wounded soldiers fairly quickly without a word. She’s unable to complain verbally, but can and will physically do everything in her power to bring her point across.
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That's my main character...though I kinda do want to make someone else... Ehh, I'll think about that one.

So? What do you think about this one?

[kid milliner]

Awsome! Really it is

[Hatter Fan]

what an interesting character! i've rarely read about one who can't talk. very creative! ^^

[kid milliner]

I'd wish I could make Chorneey voiceless but he has to talk when I ask or tell him something

[Dragongirlj]

what an interesting character! i've rarely read about one who can't talk. very creative! ^^

Thank you! ^-^

Mute characters are hard to write for, but it's a fun challenge. ^-^ The problem is that it's hard to get what the person is trying to say across.

The Dragonslayer book does it beautifully. Though, thats more of the person being extremely readable.

[HatterMusic]

Image at http://pdragongirlj.deviantart.com/art/Looking-Glass-Wars-OC-162869670

Name: Dara Kolt

Age: 24

Height: 5 ft

Gender: female

Occupation: Medical Personnel

Personality: Never speaks...at all. She takes her job a little too seriously, allowing no time for anything else other than furthering her medical expertise. She hates being around loud areas and in darkness. She smiles a lot and is warm to many but never bothers to know any of the people around her. She has learned how to speak through body language quiet fluently. She's horrible at fighting.

History: Dara was only 11 years old when she saw her mentor, the head surgeon at the Resistance Camp, die at the hands of a Glass Eye. She lost the want to speak after her mentor’s death, feeling that silence imitated the stone-coldness of her mentor’s personality. She quickly surpassed her mentor’s ability through her endless efforts to be the best and became Head Surgeon of the Resistance Camp. Still, this was not good enough for her so she kept reading, accidently forgetting her own nutrition, thus making herself resemble a skeleton. This extreme amount of studying though, though, gave her the ability to finish any job she takes on within a matter of minutes. She then took to studying a few ways of self-defense when she found she was running low on medical items to study. She soon learned that it's a tricky thing to do and is unable to hold her own in most fights. This pushes her to learn harder, but she seems blocked from learning anything more.

Special Abilities: She can heal wounded soldiers fairly quickly without a word. She’s unable to complain verbally, but can and will physically do everything in her power to bring her point across.
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That's my main character...though I kinda do want to make someone else... Ehh, I'll think about that one.

So? What do you think about this one?

Ooh... this should be interesting. Haha. ^_^ Interesting character by the way. =]

[Dragongirlj]

Ooh... this should be interesting. Haha. ^_^ Interesting character by the way. =]

Thank you!

I wish you luck on medical terminology! XD

[HatterMusic]

Thank you!

I wish you luck on medical terminology! XD

Your Welcome. ^_^

I guess I'll just have to do my research. :rolleyes:

[kid milliner]

Hey, HM you should totally listen to this song... This Fire by Killswitch engage.. That's what I'm using for Chorneey's theme you can go on YouTube to listen to it if you want please.

[HatterMusic]

Hey, HM you should totally listen to this song... This Fire by Killswitch engage.. That's what I'm using for Chorneey's theme you can go on YouTube to listen to it if you want please.

Sounds interesting. ^_^ My Mom came downstairs and I had to stop it and play another song though. =\ My parents don't like that kind of music.

[kid milliner]

Yay you like it :D

[Dragongirlj]

Your Welcome. ^_^

I guess I'll just have to do my research. :rolleyes:

Research! BAH! Research is for people who don't watch House! XD...or...you know...Scrubs, Grey's Anatomy, Private Practice.....ooooh! ROYAL PAINS! Heck yes!!!

Though...they probably don't have very accurate medical terminology....hmmmmm.

[kid milliner]

I love house!

[Dragongirlj]

I love house!

and if you're vicodin, House loves you!
or if you're in the general vicinity of the drug...

[HatterMusic]

Yay you like it :D

Haha. Yup. ^_^


Research! BAH! Research is for people who don't watch House! XD...or...you know...Scrubs, Grey's Anatomy, Private Practice.....ooooh! ROYAL PAINS! Heck yes!!!

Though...they probably don't have very accurate medical terminology....hmmmmm.


I love house!


and if you're vicodin, House loves you!
or if you're in the general vicinity of the drug...

House is awesome. ^_^ Aparently the writers of House have four real doctors check out the storyline for the patient part of the show before actually filming and airing the show so that the patient-half of the show is atleast mostly accurate. =] It was in a commercial. lol.

[kid milliner]

Lol chorneey will do anything to protect lun even if it means geting her involved in supernatural wars

[Dragongirlj]

Haha. Yup. ^_^







House is awesome. ^_^ Aparently the writers of House have four real doctors check out the storyline for the patient part of the show before actually filming and airing the show so that the patient-half of the show is atleast mostly accurate. =] It was in a commercial. lol.

Oooooh! That's interesting! I wish them luck then!

and to make their job easier, it's never lupus.

[HatterMusic]

Oooooh! That's interesting! I wish them luck then!

and to make their job easier, it's never lupus.

LOL. Nope.

[kid milliner]

i don't think Chorneey and hatter will get along very well

[Dragongirlj]

LOL. Nope.

Why is it never lupus? The world may never know!

[HatterMusic]

i don't think Chorneey and hatter will get along very well

Maybe... maybe not. Haha. ^_^


Why is it never lupus? The world may never know!

I wonder... it would be hilarious if the next episode was lupus. Haha. There are so many times in the first few seasons where almost everyone says 'lupus' around four times. xD

[Dragongirlj]

Maybe... maybe not. Haha. ^_^



I wonder... it would be hilarious if the next episode was lupus. Haha. There are so many times in the first few seasons where almost everyone says 'lupus' around four times. xD

It would be interesting...^-^ The commercial should go something similar to this.

"This week, on House, the impossible becomes possible"

*wait a pause*

"He's got Lupus?"
"What the?"

[kid milliner]

No...... He's got swine flu

[Dragongirlj]

No...... He's got swine flu

It's never Swine Flu. XD

[kid milliner]

It'd be funny the next episode someone does

[HatterMusic]

It would be interesting...^-^ The commercial should go something similar to this.

"This week, on House, the impossible becomes possible"

*wait a pause*

"He's got Lupus?"
"What the?"

xD I would be like 'O.O Oh my god.... OH. MY. GOD.... OH! MY! GOD!' then start laughing until I most likely choked myself on my own spit, recover and say 'Im okay!' about 100 times.


No...... He's got swine flu


It's never Swine Flu. XD

xD That would be odd though. But it would have to be one messed up swine flu to be swine flu without them figuring it out.

[Dragongirlj]

xD I would be like 'O.O Oh my god.... OH. MY. GOD.... OH! MY! GOD!' then start laughing until I most likely choked myself on my own spit, recover and say 'Im okay!' about 100 times.





xD That would be odd though. But it would have to be one messed up swine flu to be swine flu without them figuring it out.

Don't worry, Millions of veiwers wil be doing the same thing. XD

Just think though, it's so obvious that House wouldn't even think to do that! On the show it's always a unthought of illness that probably hasn't existed for ten years and has only taken two victims since 1302.

[kid milliner]

Oh wow I'm being laughed at

[HatterMusic]

Don't worry, Millions of veiwers wil be doing the same thing. XD

Just think though, it's so obvious that House wouldn't even think to do that! On the show it's always a unthought of illness that probably hasn't existed for ten years and has only taken two victims since 1302.

Haha. ^_^


Oh wow I'm being laughed at

.____. I wasn't laughing at you. I was laughing at what you said. I guess it was just typed out oddly so it seemed as though I... -maybe we (?)- were laughing at you. But, you have to admit that they wouldn't use swine flu on House. Plus my friends and I laugh at each other all the time. You can't take everything the wrong way. My Dad calls me a (excuse the language if this isn't following the line of rules) retard and we laugh at it all the time.

On that note, lets change the topic back to characters. ^_^

[HatterMusic]

Update-ish... thing. Hahah.

Uhmm, well there hasn't been many posts lately, so I thought that I would update on when I'll start writing and post the story. =]
So far there are only five characters including my own. Wait... no six. I'm expecting another. I haven't quite gotten that character's info. Heheh. So, I'll start writing as soon as I get that character's info as for when I'll start writing. For when I'll actually post the story, that might take a while. I have three other stories on FanFiction that I have to update, except for the fact that I'm sure some people are becoming impatient with me since I've been way to busy to write or update T_T
Anyways, I guess this post isn't for me to rant on about homework, karate or how my friends are always dragging me outside to draw Fullmetal Alchemist alchemy circles.
OH! Here's a link to my profile page on FanFiction: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1952578/camokass
All my stories that I have are currently anime-based. Haha. ^_^
Anyways, I'll get to posting up my character soon. I promise! =]

[kid milliner]

Yay! Your thingy.......uhm

[Dragongirlj]

Awesome! ^-^ Good luck!

[HatterMusic]

Yay! Your thingy.......uhm


Awesome! ^-^ Good luck!

Haha. Yup. xD

Thanks. ^_^

Okay, so I finally got that character card I've been waiting for, which I'm not allowed to tell you who it is under strict orders from said person's editor. Haha. Its a little confusing, but you'll figure it out once I get the FanFiction posted. So, I will now tell you about my character. =]

~

Name: Kyoko Lacey Hawkins
Age: 17
Height: 5'7"
Gender: Female
Occupation: Originally earthling, then a citizen Wondertropolis (Haha. Just a name I came up for people on earth. Tell me if I spelled 'Wondertropolis' wrong)
Personality: Kyoko doesn't normally take things seriously, unless something important to her is at risk. She cares dearly about her friends and family. She is a tomboy. She has natural talents for running, throwing and catching. She has extremely sharp reflexes. She is also a master of mixed martial arts, having taken lessons from an old friend in secret.
Appearance: Kyoko has just-past-shoulder-length hair that is a dark brown and is often worn down and not up in a bun. Her body-shape is more masculine than feminine with her being a tomboy she is fairly strong for a young woman. She normally wears plain dresses as she isn't allowed to dress in trousers.
History: Kyoko's parents were killed during the crossfire of a barfight when she was 8 and she was soon after sent to an orphanage. She lived there for 3 years before she was taken in by a very rich couple. When she was 15 she found a puddle, where no puddle should be and went to Wonderland, deciding to live there for the rest of her life and never going back to the world where she wasn't allowed to dress how she wanted.

~

So yeah. Thats my character. :D

If you still want to submit a character feel free to go ahead.

Also, a note on when I'll start typing: I was thinking about the FanFic and I remembered that I hadn't finished ArchEnemy yet. I live in Canada and it just came out recently here so I haven't completely finished it yet. Hehe. So, I'm going to finish reading ArchEnemy before I type up the FanFic.

[Dragongirlj]

Haha. Yup. xD

Thanks. ^_^

Okay, so I finally got that character card I've been waiting for, which I'm not allowed to tell you who it is under strict orders from said person's editor. Haha. Its a little confusing, but you'll figure it out once I get the FanFiction posted. So, I will now tell you about my character. =]

~

Name: Kyoko Lacey Hawkins
Age: 17
Height: 5'7"
Gender: Female
Occupation: Originally earthling, then a citizen Wondertropolis (Haha. Just a name I came up for people on earth. Tell me if I spelt 'Wondertropolis' wrong)
Personality: Kyoko doesn't normally take things seriously, unless something important to her is at risk. She cares dearly about her friends and family. She is a tomboy. She has natural talents for running, throwing and catching. She has extremely sharp reflexes. She is also a master of mixed martial arts, having taken lessons from an old friend in secret.
Appearance: Kyoko has just-past-shoulder-length hair that is a dark brown and is often worn down and not up in a bun. Her body-shape is more masculine than feminine with her being a tomboy she is fairly strong for a young woman. She normally wears plain dresses as she isn't allowed to dress in trousers.
History: Kyoko's parents were killed during the crossfire of a barfight when she was 8 and she was soon after sent to an orphanage. She lived there for 3 years before she was taken in by a very rich couple. When she was 15 she found a puddle, where no puddle should be and went to Wonderland, deciding to live there for the rest of her life and never going back to the world where she wasn't allowed to dress how she wanted.

~

So yeah. Thats my character. :D

If you still want to submit a character feel free to go ahead.

Also, a note on when I'll start typing: I was thinking about the FanFic and I remembered that I hadn't finished ArchEnemy yet. I live in Canada and it just came out recently here so I haven't completely finished it yet. Hehe. So, I'm going to finish reading ArchEnemy before I type up the FanFic.

Oooh! sounds good!

[Pluto is a Planet]

Tell me if I spelt 'Wondertropolis' wrong

You have Wondertropolis correct, but you spelled "spelled" wrong hahaha :p

[HatterMusic]

Oooh! sounds good!

Haha. Thanks! ^_^


You have Wondertropolis correct, but you spelled "spelled" wrong hahaha :p

Oh. xD

[kid milliner]

Haha. Yup. xD

Thanks. ^_^

Okay, so I finally got that character card I've been waiting for, which I'm not allowed to tell you who it is under strict orders from said person's editor. Haha. Its a little confusing, but you'll figure it out once I get the FanFiction posted. So, I will now tell you about my character. =]

~

Name: Kyoko Lacey Hawkins
Age: 17
Height: 5'7"
Gender: Female
Occupation: Originally earthling, then a citizen Wondertropolis (Haha. Just a name I came up for people on earth. Tell me if I spelled 'Wondertropolis' wrong)
Personality: Kyoko doesn't normally take things seriously, unless something important to her is at risk. She cares dearly about her friends and family. She is a tomboy. She has natural talents for running, throwing and catching. She has extremely sharp reflexes. She is also a master of mixed martial arts, having taken lessons from an old friend in secret.
Appearance: Kyoko has just-past-shoulder-length hair that is a dark brown and is often worn down and not up in a bun. Her body-shape is more masculine than feminine with her being a tomboy she is fairly strong for a young woman. She normally wears plain dresses as she isn't allowed to dress in trousers.
History: Kyoko's parents were killed during the crossfire of a barfight when she was 8 and she was soon after sent to an orphanage. She lived there for 3 years before she was taken in by a very rich couple. When she was 15 she found a puddle, where no puddle should be and went to Wonderland, deciding to live there for the rest of her life and never going back to the world where she wasn't allowed to dress how she wanted.

~

So yeah. Thats my character. :D

If you still want to submit a character feel free to go ahead.

Also, a note on when I'll start typing: I was thinking about the FanFic and I
remembered that I hadn't finished ArchEnemy yet. I live in Canada and it just came out recently here so I haven't completely finished it yet. Hehe. So, I'm going to finish reading ArchEnemy before I type up the FanFic.

Awsome! Really it is

[HatterMusic]

Awsome! Really it is

^_^ Thanks.

[The Hattertant]

I can't wait to see how all these characters will mix together. ^_^

[HatterMusic]

I can't wait to see how all these characters will mix together. ^_^

Haha. Me either.
I have to memorize all the personalities so I don't have to keep looking back at this thread though. D= ... Then again I could just type it out on Word so I have another document up while I'm typing...

[The Hattertant]

Haha. Me either.
I have to memorize all the personalities so I don't have to keep looking back at this thread though. D= ... Then again I could just type it out on Word so I have another document up while I'm typing...

Copy and paste! copy and paste! =D

[HatterMusic]

Copy and paste! copy and paste! =D

Haha. That works too! ^_^ *goes and copies and pastes*

[Dragongirlj]

Copy and paste. It's the key to the secrets of the universe! XD

[HatterMusic]

Copy and paste. It's the key to the secrets of the universe! XD

Haha. Copy and paste!!

Mini-update-that-isn't-entirely-LGW-related: Okay, so if you like the anime Kuroshitsuji, I started a FanFiction of LGW and Kuroshitsuji crossover. ^_^ I just thought that it would be an interesting FanFic with the different characters. Plus, both series are in a highly similar time era. ^_^ The FanFic is called 'The Demon and the Milliner'. ^_^ Anyways, thats all for my Mini-update-that-isn't-entirely-LGW-related.

[Dragongirlj]

oooooh, good luck with that. LGW is a very tough thing to crossover with something else.

[The Hattertant]

oooooh, good luck with that. LGW is a very tough thing to crossover with something else.

*nods* not only that, but the readers have to know the two sides being crossed over... and a lot of the times, readers only know one side. XP

[Dragongirlj]

*nods* not only that, but the readers have to know the two sides being crossed over... and a lot of the times, readers only know one side. XP

This is true, it's helpful to crossover with something mainstream...0_0 except for Twilight. NOTHING IS EVER GOOD WITH TWILIGHT!

[kid milliner]

This is true, it's helpful to crossover with something mainstream...0_0 except for Twilight. NOTHING IS EVER GOOD WITH TWILIGHT!

Hurd that sistah!

[HatterMusic]

oooooh, good luck with that. LGW is a very tough thing to crossover with something else.


*nods* not only that, but the readers have to know the two sides being crossed over... and a lot of the times, readers only know one side. XP


This is true, it's helpful to crossover with something mainstream...0_0 except for Twilight. NOTHING IS EVER GOOD WITH TWILIGHT!


Hurd that sistah!

Yeah... LGW is hard to crossover with, but thats why you just post on the forums that you've made an LGW crossover. I'm sure most of us here know what FanFiction.net is. ^_^ And, surprisingly (well, surprisingly to me) a lot of people on here like anime/manga. =]

Yeah... Twilight is just... annoying. Eclipse is coming out the week of my birthday (my friend told me). =.='

[kid milliner]

How long till ya post it?

[Dragongirlj]

Yeah... LGW is hard to crossover with, but thats why you just post on the forums that you've made an LGW crossover. I'm sure most of us here know what FanFiction.net is. ^_^ And, surprisingly (well, surprisingly to me) a lot of people on here like anime/manga. =]

Yeah... Twilight is just... annoying. Eclipse is coming out the week of my birthday (my friend told me). =.='


I do like anime and manga, but is the other one you're crossing avalable to read on the net?

*sends you imaginary Eclipse tickets for your birthday* :D

Online, there's a movie critic and his reviews over Twilight and New Moon had me dying from over-laughing.

Twilight

http://thatguywiththeglasses.com/videolinks/thatguywiththeglasses/bum-reviews/2741-twilight

New Moon

http://thatguywiththeglasses.com/videolinks/thatguywiththeglasses/bum-reviews/13853-ep032

[HatterMusic]

How long till ya post it?

The Kuroshitsuji/LGW crossover? It's already posted. ^_^ Well, the first chapter.


I do like anime and manga, but is the other one you're crossing avalable to read on the net?

*sends you imaginary Eclipse tickets for your birthday* :D

Online, there's a movie critic and his reviews over Twilight and New Moon had me dying from over-laughing.

Twilight

http://thatguywiththeglasses.com/videolinks/thatguywiththeglasses/bum-reviews/2741-twilight

New Moon

http://thatguywiththeglasses.com/videolinks/thatguywiththeglasses/bum-reviews/13853-ep032

*points at reply to kid milliner* Is that the FanFic your talking about?
Haha.

*watches videos* OMG! xD That was hilarious!!

Update-that-is-on-the-original-reason-this-forum-was-created-...-well-somewhat-related: Okay... I haven't really been reading lately, so I haven't exactly started the FanFiction yet. I'm only half-way through ArchEnemy (I'm a slow reader.. heheh *sweatdrop*) so, I'm going to say that I won't start the FanFic until... sometime in June. Heheh... sorry for making you guys wait so long.

[kid milliner]

The Kuroshitsuji/LGW crossover? It's already posted. ^_^ Well, the first chapter.



*points at reply to kid milliner* Is that the FanFic your talking about?
Haha.

*watches videos* OMG! xD That was hilarious!!
Update-that-is-on-the-original-reason-this-forum-was-created-...-well-somewhat-related: Okay... I haven't really been reading lately, so I haven't exactly started the FanFiction yet. I'm only half-way through ArchEnemy (I'm a slow reader.. heheh *sweatdrop*) so, I'm going to say that I won't start the FanFic until... sometime in June. Heheh... sorry for making you guys wait so long.


Link please?

[HatterMusic]

Link please?

.__.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5988361/1/The_Demon_and_the_Milliner

^_^

[kid milliner]

Omg awsome!

[Dragongirlj]

Read it, didn't understand most of it (because I haven't read the anime) and somewhat enjoyed it. it was good writing!

[HatterMusic]

Omg awsome!

^_^ Thanks.


Read it, didn't understand most of it (because I haven't read the anime) and somewhat enjoyed it. it was good writing!

'Read the anime'? o.O Uhmm... anime = Japanese animation. Manga = Japanese comics. Haha. Just thought I would point that out. ^_^ I've heard the manga is better though. Unfortunatly onemanga.com took it off their website as per request from the publishers. =.=' Guess we'll just have to:
a) buy the manga from a store (and pay 12.00$ for one book, in which only 2 are available in North America as far as I know)
b) read it somewhere else online thats probably crappy
Now, I should probably stop my ranting about manga being expensive, which I could probably rant about for hours.

[Dragongirlj]

^_^ Thanks.



'Read the anime'? o.O Uhmm... anime = Japanese animation. Manga = Japanese comics. Haha. Just thought I would point that out. ^_^ I've heard the manga is better though. Unfortunatly onemanga.com took it off their website as per request from the publishers. =.=' Guess we'll just have to:
a) buy the manga from a store (and pay 12.00$ for one book, in which only 2 are available in North America as far as I know)
b) read it somewhere else online thats probably crappy
Now, I should probably stop my ranting about manga being expensive, which I could probably rant about for hours.

XD trust me to get that wrong. allright, I haven't read that manga.

And yes, manga is expensive, good, and addicting. ^-^

[HatterMusic]

XD trust me to get that wrong. allright, I haven't read that manga.

And yes, manga is expensive, good, and addicting. ^-^

Haha. Yup, manga is actually addicting. I officialy have 6 manga (since their so expensive here in Canada I only have a few even though I've liked anime/manga for a little over a year).

[Hatter lulu]

sounds cool

[Shadow]

I like making up characters... even if it would be no use,I think I may make up a character... for fun,also. I have been thinking of some... Actually,my user name came from one character I made up...

[HatterMusic]

I like making up characters... even if it would be no use,I think I may make up a character... for fun,also. I have been thinking of some... Actually,my user name came from one character I made up...

Well, if you would like, you can still create a character. I still haven't started writing. Just remember to follow the character skelliton and add detail. ^_^

Update: I'm about 10-15 chapters to the end of ArchEnemy. I haven't been reading too much lately. Heheh. I'll finish reading when I can, I promise! =]

[Shadow]

One of my friends was talking to me,and I wouldnt know if it would be a good idea,but how about a blind milliner? Like a Toph sort if character from Avatar,or a Cregga Badger mum,from The Red wall series? Who can just tell where things are? If it would be a good idea,then I will work more on it... Would Cynthia be an Ok name?

[HatterMusic]

One of my friends was talking to me,and I wouldnt know if it would be a good idea,but how about a blind milliner? Like a Toph sort if character from Avatar,or a Cregga Badger mum,from The Red wall series? Who can just tell where things are? If it would be a good idea,then I will work more on it... Would Cynthia be an Ok name?

I'm sorry to say this, but I think there already is a blind character. =\ Don't get me wrong, a blind milliner would be totally cool (although difficult for said milliner I would assume)! But having two blind characters in one story is a little bit... much, if I can say it that way. I'll check this thread over when I have time to see if I can find out if I already have a blind character.

[The Hattertant]

'blind' Milliners? ooh! I have one! *grabs Quinn*

Quinn: Oi! No, 'ates, I'm 'ot blind a' all! I can see jus' a' fine as any you 'ates can! This lass 'ere, she's lying, aye.

...XP

[HatterMusic]

'blind' Milliners? ooh! I have one! *grabs Quinn*

Quinn: Oi! No, 'ates, I'm 'ot blind a' all! I can see jus' a' fine as any you 'ates can! This lass 'ere, she's lying, aye.

...XP

Haha. Nice. ^_^

Anyways, I still haven't checked the thread over, but I do remember a blind character. Jeez... I really need to copy all the characters into Word and read them over again before writing. =\

Just another note, I don't know if I've mentioned this or not, but on FanFiction I do have other FanFics and unfortunatly, the LGW series isn't too popular on FanFiction. So, I'm sorry to say that this story won't be in my top priorities to finish. =\ But I do promise that I'll update when I can. This is not saying that I have started writing yet, more like saying that I'm about to start writing soon. I'm going on vacation (I don't know if I'll have WiFi unfortunatly) soon and I find vacation is the best time to write. ^_^ Haha. I think that's it.

[HatterMusic]

Okay. So I was in a car all day yesterday, obviously I was reading the whole time. I finally finished ArchEnemy!!! =D That now allows me to start writing the FanFic. ^_^ If there are any last second character entries, now would be the time to enter them, 'cause I'm going to be sitting around again tonight and that just gives me plenty of time to write. You might be lucky though, because I have to write another chapter for another FanFiction of mine. I have two that I must update since I haven't updated them in forever (D.Gray-Man OC Fic and LGWxKuroshitsuji Fic). Though this one is my second priority (?) instead of the LGWxKuroshitsuji one and the D.Gray-Man one is my first priority because a)it's my second most popular fic despite it using OCs and b)I promised a friend I would update asap. So, there you have it. I will start writing this evening around... I'm going to say 5:30-ish my time, which you could say is California time, but it isn't. It's also British Columbia, Canada time. ^_^ So if I write this whole weekend and Monday and I finish the first chapter, the Fic will be up on Tuesday night. =]
Okay, I always think that I suck at giving FanFics names, so, what do you think the FanFics name should be?

[Shadow]

Okay. So I was in a car all day yesterday, obviously I was reading the whole time. I finally finished ArchEnemy!!! =D That now allows me to start writing the FanFic. ^_^ If there are any last second character entries, now would be the time to enter them, 'cause I'm going to be sitting around again tonight and that just gives me plenty of time to write. You might be lucky though, because I have to write another chapter for another FanFiction of mine. I have two that I must update since I haven't updated them in forever (D.Gray-Man OC Fic and LGWxKuroshitsuji Fic). Though this one is my second priority (?) instead of the LGWxKuroshitsuji one and the D.Gray-Man one is my first priority because a)it's my second most popular fic despite it using OCs and b)I promised a friend I would update asap. So, there you have it. I will start writing this evening around... I'm going to say 5:30-ish my time, which you could say is California time, but it isn't. It's also British Columbia, Canada time. ^_^ So if I write this whole weekend and Monday and I finish the first chapter, the Fic will be up on Tuesday night. =]
Okay, I always think that I suck at giving FanFics names, so, what do you think the FanFics name should be?

It's great that you finished Arch enemy! =) Is if good? I couldn't read it earlier,becase of school,and A.R points,I had to read a different book but now I can start it! Well... are you going to add something to the name,like Hatter,or Homburg? Well,I always thought that Cynhia is a nice name... but I don't know if it sounds like a looking glass wars character... maybe if something was added to it,but of course,it's just a suggustion. :)

[The Hattertant]

Okay, I always think that I suck at giving FanFics names, so, what do you think the FanFics name should be?

How about if I be your editor. =) I can help you with a name for it then and i can make sure all your typos are really really gone. Because sometime they appear out of nowhere. You'll just have to email me the chapters before you put them on FF.net. ^_^ I'm willing to help with that and I can also offer you crit advice too if you would like that.

(I wish I had had an editor for when I wrote the first half of TAoRaT... SIGH XD)

[HatterMusic]

It's great that you finished Arch enemy! =) Is if good? I couldn't read it earlier,becase of school,and A.R points,I had to read a different book but now I can start it!

ArchEnemy was great! ^_^ I loved it!


How about if I be your editor. =) I can help you with a name for it then and i can make sure all your typos are really really gone. Because sometime they appear out of nowhere. You'll just have to email me the chapters before you put them on FF.net. ^_^ I'm willing to help with that and I can also offer you crit advice too if you would like that.

(I wish I had had an editor for when I wrote the first half of TAoRaT... SIGH XD)

Kinda like a beta-reader? =] That would be cool. ^_^

[Shadow]

ArchEnemy was great! ^_^ I loved it!



Kinda like a beta-reader? =] That would be cool. ^_^

Cool,Im glad it was good... I know it's a spoiler... but I just need to know one thing... Does Hatter Madigan die? (I sure hope not!)

[HatterMusic]

Cool,Im glad it was good... I know it's a spoiler... but I just need to know one thing... Does Hatter Madigan die? (I sure hope not!)

O.O No!!!! That would totally ruin the whole series!! ... sorry. Spaz out. ^_^'

[The Hattertant]

Kinda like a beta-reader? =] That would be cool. ^_^

Yes! exactly. ^_^ hehe.

[HatterMusic]

Yes! exactly. ^_^ hehe.

Oooh! Cool! ^_^ I need a beta-reader-type-person anyways. =]

[The Hattertant]

Oooh! Cool! ^_^ I need a beta-reader-type-person anyways. =]

Well, you've found one. *points to self* ^_^

[HatterMusic]

Well, you've found one. *points to self* ^_^

Haha. Yay! =D *claps*

[HatterMusic]

UPDATE:

Okay... This thread has kind of died. Haha. But Hattertant and I are in the editing process of the first chapter and I'm in the middle of writing my draft for the second chapter, which has all the characters in it (I think) rather than just mine, which is what the first chapter pretty much is. It's Kyoko's adventure into Wonderland and meeting the characters we created, along with some of the cannon characters, which will be farther into the FanFic. I swear I'm not going to just throw all your characters into the background and make them nothing, they do/will play key parts as the FF progresses. Hopefully the first chapter will be up soon. ^_^

OH! Still feel free to share your characters. :] I would love some more antagonists. Actually, I need more antagonists. Haha. ^_^' I've created another few characters you'll meet in the second chapter, but I won't post their profiles here.

Anyways. I think thats all. So yeah. ^_^

[The Hattertant]

*pokes Hatter Music*

Don't kill me for poking you, but I was just curious as to how things are coming along with this story. =) are you still continuing to write it or is school sucking away your brain too?